Friday 30 November 2012

My Trailer First Draft

Teaser Trailer


This was my first attempt at creating my trailer. The length of the trailer is good for a teaser trailer but the trailer does not show enough information, in my opinion, to have a solid plot. What it shows is a girl trying to kill two other girls in the woods. We do not know why the murderer has chosen them, why the killer became a killer, why they are all in the woods, or whether anyone will survive. It does not show any suspense and does not leave the audience asking "what happens next?” Although all this information should not be revealed until the audience watch the film but some of the information should be revealed in order to create a secure plot. Having a cliff hanger at the end of the trailer, means that the audience will have got enough information in the first half of the trailer to understand a little about the film but will not know what is about to happen next and so may wish to go to see the film, on its release.

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